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Cheer up my Friend

Hello my friend
What troubles you?
In life there is no time to be blue
So take that frown off your face
And place all your worries to the side
I am here for you
So whatever you do,please do not cry
I am your friend till the very end
There's not much I can do
But I'm doing the best I can
So cheer up my friend.....no need to be blue
There is much in life you can pursue
Cause I know there is a lot in you
When I was down you were there for me
So here I am while in your time of need
What is the cause of you being blue?
You know I hate seeing you like this
Pick up your head and look at me
And look in my eyes and tell me what you see
Is what you see a big Thank You for being there for me?
Tell me honestly
Are you glad to have a friend like me?
Please tell me what is wrong
I could wait here all day long
Just tell me the reason why you are blue
Cheer up my friend
I am here for you.

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    This is a very nice write.
    In life there is no time to be blue
    So take that frown off your face
    And place all your worries to the side
    I am here for you
    Very sweet indeed
    Goodluck in the contest

  • trace3grls
    July 22, 2007
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    this is so sweet


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 15, 2007

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    This is so sweet and very inspiring
    work. It's great to have a friend
    who is always by your side and won't
    leave you all alone when you really
    need them to be there for you. You
    have a great heart!




    Jeremy0826

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    Awwww how sweet. Loving and touching. I'm sure your friend truly appreciates this. I know I would. Thanks for entering my contest.
    Good luck.
    Brian


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Your work carries so much emotion and you allow us to feel that. I think you have talent and I am excited to watch you grow on here! So pleased you stumbled across me on this site It is a pleasure to read your work ~tia


    • ItalianRebelRoOcker
      July 6, 2007
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      Wow thank u sooooo much.You know I know a lot of sweet people on here but ur really sweet.Thank you soooo much.I am glad u enjoyed.Thanks again.'s


  • thelovesongwriter
    June 23, 2007
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    i wish i had a friend like you


  • your.guardian.angel
    June 9, 2007
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    that is relle sweet, ur friend should feel really loved.


  • silentlyscreaming.
    June 9, 2007

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    aww this is cute. i really like it. i have a friend like this and wish i could show her that i really do care and want her to be happy like you did in this poem. my favorite part is "There is much in life you can pursue
    Cause I know there is a lot in you
    When I was down you were there for me
    So here I am while in your time of need"

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