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The protector

A hero in my heart,
I will always love you.
You’ll always be remembered,
You’ll never be forgotten.

A husband and a brother,
A son and a soldier,
You played your part here well
There just wasn’t enough time

You were so much more to me
Than just a brother and a husband,
You were a teacher, an example
In chaos, you were reason.

Your body may be gone,
Your voice may not be heard again
But what you taught me I will keep
Within in us, your spirit will live on.

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this is written for my brother. Lost recently in combat in Iraq. I was asked to write a poem and deliver it at his funeral, I want your opinion. Is it good enough?

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