I can't reach you
I want to reach up and touch you with my trembling hands
I can't reach you but I love you
You're always there in my vivid mind,
Colors forming to make your face
I will never leave this love behind
These things about you can never erase...
When I'm falling, your hand is always out of reach
I'm falling deeper into an abyss of darkness with nothing to hold on to
Still struggling to find your hand and the lessons from the things you teach
I want to touch you but I will never be able to
You're just a dream, floating in my head endlessly
You're nothing, just a dream but look at what pain you're putting me through
Yet you'll see me consuming these hopeless visions happily
I can't reach you
I'm trying, praying, hoping and still dreaming
I've made a mistake to fall for you
Depression is what I'm achieving
I want to touch you
I want to hold you
I want to kiss you
I want you to be real
In my dreams, you're always there for me
Nothing to hide and conceal
In my dreams, together, we'll always be
And I know you're not real
But you'll always be real in my dreams
Author notes
Pain aches in my heart for someone specail to me.
He isn't real. But I wish he was.
His name is Deidara. I know he's just an anime character.
But I sitll love him.
I'm just obbsessive, that's all.
Okaaayy, enough of the Dark, Emo, Pain, Love type talk here... 0o
OOC TIME!!!
DEIDARA!!! I love him to death and i wanted to write something specail for him. ^^ so this emo poem came out of nowhere! XDDD I hope I'm progressing of writing poems... XDDD hopefully...
Okaayy, let the truth be told. >.
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Awesome!
haha Deidara is currently my obsession! He's simply amazing X3 -
Perfect!
OMG! This is beautiful! It's something I've been trying to portray for so long, but couldn't put into words! I know exactly how you feel! I think Deidara rocks, too, but my obsession is Prince Zuko from Avatar: the Last Airbender.
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A VERY GOOD PIECE
dont know of whom you speak inthis poem but i can understanding wanting and loving someone or something you cant have very well done i think you meant you've instead of you're thirteenth line down "but look at what (you're) done" good work though -
good write.
I like this write. you did a good job on it! keep it up! I love how you put everything into perspective here. keep it up! great work!
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cute yet sad. I can so relate to this! SOSOSOSOOSOSOSOO and I feel glad that I'm not the only one who feels like this at times ^.^ But tahat doesn't soften the pain of it.
I think this is one of my favourite pieces in a while-so deep. Wow. Keep it up
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^^ thx for reading. >.> i had a fangirl and emo momment. >.>;;
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I love it! It's so deep and...so emotion-filled!! >_<
I really, REALLY like this.
Hey! There's nothing wrong with writing emo poems. Welcome to the dark side =D -
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Thx Yume-nii-chan! <33 Ur support helps. XD
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SO DEEP...SO BEAUTIFU....I'M CRYING
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I was crying when I wrote this. I spilled all my guts for Deidara. T___T *sobs will u*
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