I cannot die
I recorded my soul
It will play over and over
Every time the bell tolls
I wrote down my feelings
And secrets
On the net and velium sheets
For those that seek it's wisdom
Will no be obsolete
So I can now live forever
In you and others at best
I can live on from this time
After my heart grows still in my chest
A contest entry
- A Reason to Care by Hypocritical Oath.
850 points, ended November 6, 2007, 11 entries
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Hi, sorry but my head's pounding and I'm having more of a problem remembering things than usual. I know I have read this before, for this contest, though did I comment? I can't see one though I'm so sure I did. Or was it you I wrote to asking for more detail? Agh, damn memory loss!
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Hmmm
It's a good poem, don't get me wrong, though I can't see the connection with the theme. This could just be me however, would you care to enlighten me? Please? -
Interesting take on immortality. As always it's nicely written and well worded. A lot of dark stuff from you lately. Is everything really ok?
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Wrote this along time ago probably while working and bored to death at ACS
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