soft and gentle
or fast and pounding
the heart beats on
In a list
A contest entry
- Riddle Me An Entry by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended June 10, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Review Requested
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I like this one
can you tell me in your own words what makes a write haiku? I enjoyed reading yours it seemed to resoate with thought afterwards of reading it
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Roaddog Wolf
For me, a haiku should be written in sense images and not statements. When you read a haiku you should be able to see, feel, hear, taste the haiku. Whatever sense the hajin uses in his or her writing. It should be in present tense as a snapshot in time. What all hajin strive for is the last line to be "aha" moment. That is probably the hardest thing to obtain. If the haiku can be interpreted several different ways and it allows the reader that avenue, it is a big plus. I hope this is what you were looking for. -
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THANKS VERY MUCH pOLLYCHECK THAT IS A GREAT BIG HELP
VERY GOOD explanation thank you for taking your time to help me understand
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Great one! So true. The heart beats on, anyway we look at it. Love the background, simple but cute.
Thank you for entering
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StormGoddess
Thank you so much for your kind words and comments. They are greatly appreciated.
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This is so good, what a great haiku riddle! Good l uck in the contest!
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Susie
Thank you for the comments on my riddle haiku. Your comments are always appreciated and cherished.
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