The night was young
The sky was barely dark
He couldn't wait to begin
The glorious journey of pleasure
He brought her to their
Special, treasured place
He held her dearly never
Wanting to let go
He stared into the murky
Amber depths of her eyes
Becoming mesmerized by them
Taking and believing in everything
She promised him before hand
He was immediately lost by
The view of her sinful lips
Tempting him to taste-test
The blinding, luring storm
That would lead to insanity
He brought his lips to hers
Taking in the essence of her
Getting lost in the sea of colors
Making him eager to have more
This was the beginning of
The amazing night that changed
His whole being completely
Author notes
This is the first of the three part poem
Hope you enjoy it! Please feel free to read the next two poems.
The link to the next poem: http://allpoetry.com/poem/3057608
The link to the last poem: http://allpoetry.com/poem/3057634
A contest entry
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Nothing's like a great night full of passion. I loved this write. I loved the flow and I loved the wording. I loved how it didn't go into to much detail but yet just enough. I loved the part about taste-testing. That was a whole new way of putting it.
T.H
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I love this poem. I can imagine it. Great write. Very well worded.
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Nice
The beginning of romance.That first night of being in each others presence giving all of one another.That first time is the most special and can never be recaotured.
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awesome
it had alot of feeling in it....keep up the good work
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smiling
Boy how I miss those nights. Love & lust. the thrill & the exploration. Oh boy..nicely done
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this is really good because it is so sensual,
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romantic lustful intriguing sinful excellent
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