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the heart with in me

i cry out fore you to understand
that i want you to take me by my hand
and guide me through the light of the promise land
because all i see is the dark of night
it set me a fright not knowing
what i had until last night
your words cut me like a knife
left me with a bitter bite

as the storm came in
it once again showed
i was in pain of what
i was going to miss
why does god do this
to me when all i ask of him is for happiness


now time is all i wish
to give you with each passing kiss
yes you are my wish
to share every last breath with
fore my heart cant take this pain
within it so i ask you what is your wish
all i wanted is for your happiness  now it is your wish
to tell me if we can seal this with a kiss











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  • blue20bunny
    June 11, 2007

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    very emotional

    you seem to have wrote this from deep within your heart.i'm glad you are able to move on with your life..sorry if i caused you trouble in the past .but understand the things that have went on , i'll forgive but never forget.especially the things said in front of my kids..but i will not continue a friendship like we had before,but i wish you all the happiness in the world and i think you need to just let go of your past and move on.. good write but please check your spelling.............


  • robert bolin
    June 10, 2007
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    Lela -- I know what you are going through? I have been there too, But now that I have finally moved I do understand, You have to also move on, You have Zack now, And in time, You and Zack will be married and living in caldwell, Please understand Lela there should not be any confusion, You said you love Zack and I accepted it, bob..


  • dustookie2
    June 9, 2007

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    I feel emotion within these lines a questioning perhaps even confusion .... you have captured the chaos with descriptive expression. I hope you find peace and the happiness we all seek in life.