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Demented Rainbows

        Demented rainbows are a terrible thing
        So why don't you cheer up and start to sing
        After the 'ding'
        The rainbows will be demented again.

        Rainbows are supposed to have beautiful colors
        Not Goth,
        Nor black,
        Not even a bewitched dog collar
        They're supposed to be happy
        Not mad and crappy
        With this demented thing
        The leprechaun can't go laughing
        And jumping on the demented rainbows.

        What shall we do?
        Oh yes,
        What shall we do?
        Just let this once beautiful rainbow shrivel in poo?
        Most definitely not
        Let this un-guilty rainbow rot
        And be the evil sky demons food.

        Why rainbows represent such hapiness and joy
        How come it was turned into such a misrable dark toy
        I shall simply save
        The rainbow of the colors it gave
        To us to share
        And get gloomy and be in despair.

        I hope you have learned from this lesson
        That rainbows are colorful and free
        And not a Demented Peaseant
        So gradually you shall learn
        That the rainbow shall turn
          If it is disrupted and turned demented and the colors are burned.

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This is a poem about how hapiness is what a rainbow is all about and that anger turns it to be demented.

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  • Celticmoon
    June 12, 2007
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    Rainbows are a wonderful thing. they are trukly beautiful with all the colors just flowing so splendidly across the sky. They have always made me smile. You have done well writing this poem. A very clever piece too. Nicely Done!


    Blessings
    celticmoon