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Darren's Friendship

I know Evra Von your green
many chuckles came your way
but to you I only feel lucky
for your friendship I hold dear

you will never fall prey
to my blood sucking ways
your my pal I throw trust
with you I do play

in many boyish ways
games and fun together we run.

A contest entry

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  • travis34dietC
    June 9, 2007
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    nice! i like how you made the poem from Darren's view.
    thanks for entering and good luck!