Rictameter is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2,4,6,8,10 Then down again, 8,6,4,2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.
Your eyes
I can feel you
Your eyes upon me now
With every single glance you take
I search for your green eyes, then they appear
When they are upon me, I shake
How much will time allow?
I need, I love,
Your eyes
Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}
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I just had to read this one
I just wrote a poem about eyes myself. Yours is very much lighter-I like that. Well done. lol
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awww this was good I liked it! especially since I have green eyes anyway great write!
-Steve-
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haha, I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading
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Very well done! Loooooooooove it! I love the question you pose....adds a sence of longing....ah, very good work darlin'! Dang yer gettin' goood at this stuff gurl!!
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haha thanks so much! I'm glad you "Loooooooooove it!", and thanks for the applause
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No need to thank me for what you deserve!
But you are most welcome!
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haha
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