Rictameter is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2,4,6,8,10 Then down again, 8,6,4,2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.
Your eyes
I can feel you
Your eyes upon me now
With every single glance you take
I search for your green eyes, then they appear
When they're upon me, I shake
How much will time allow?
I need, I love
Your eyes
Please tell me what you think
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Wow
It is so hard to pick between these two forms, I like them both. hahaha. lol
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good job
this is good. I like it a alot.
keep it up!
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