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Better Days?

When you wake up to a quiet house, and realize the family's running erronds-
You know you're about to have a good day

When you can eat a chocolate cone for breakfast, and there's still ice cream left in the container-
This day is getting greater

When you see the kids' rooms, and they're actually clean, and their report cards on their dresser say: A,A+,A,A,A -
Better and better

When you look in the mirror and see a smiling face, and your anti-wrinkle cream is actually working-
You know you haven't had better days.

Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}

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  • redradical
    June 9, 2007

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    I laughed at this and felt quite uplifted as well. Those indeed sound like better days, and I can relate to the joy of having a quiet house. You can get much done. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for the laughs and good feelings.


    • starXcrossedxlover
      June 9, 2007
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      Thnaks! I'm so glad you liked it. I love brightening peoples' days. Thanks for your generous applause


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    June 9, 2007
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    LOL Comical

    I got some good laughs outta this poem because it really made me laugh and also made me smile. very well penned and a wonderful entry to my lil contest. I enjoyed reading this poem alot and also had alot of fun. any ways thanks again for entering and best of luck to yas