Love is beautiful and beautiful you make me feel
Melodies of Marvin Gave in your presence
but I don’t want you to be another rose in my garden
because I felt its beauty so many times
and its beauty is so much like true love to me
I care for my heart because I care for me
and love is so beautiful that it would take
this heart away like it did before
I found myself trying to find the melodies
of the happiness trying to capture all of
the fallen notes yet some drifts of in the
palms of the wind, finding the notes with
past memories which filled the melodies
of my song
but what if I can’t find no more
of the melodies and your love take my
heart with you and I can’t find you
tell me what I should do?
What would you do when their is nothing to do...
and another rose emerges?
A contest entry
- Confliction by BlankSillhouette.
600 points, ended March 5, 2008, 43 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was a beautifully portrayed piece, and the metaphorical phrases were absolutely breathtaking! You are an amazing writer and i positively loved this piece! Great write!!!
thanks for entering the contest and good luck
Best of wishes
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I love how you symbolized the rose:
"but I don’t want you to be another rose in my garden
because I felt its beauty so many times
and its beauty is so much like true love to me"
Very good job. -
This is a very nice piece of work. I am sorry too (title of my poem), anyways, I like it. It is a pretty nice and cascade down neatly. Keep up the most wonderful job and may God burst forth more talent into your heart
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I like this poem, I actually got it. (yay) anyways, I decided to check this out b4 I checked out the last next one. ooo, can't wait.
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