One, two, three, four,
The pebble bounces on the floor.
Five, six, seven, eight
The chalk and tennis shoes debate.
Nine, ten, here we go,
The tennis shoes skip to and fro,
Eleven, twelve, the whistle blows;
There’s my turn, and there it goes.
Author notes
age 11
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ Pick a Title and Roll With it 2 by Amunet Wolfbane.
450 points, ended June 14, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Yay for hopscotch
cute read...it took me back to when I used to play hopscotch. The rhyme was great also. Nice job! -
I love the ryhme...it dosen't seem awkward at all. I like how you counted in between the main lines.
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I can remember as a child playing this game. I always somehow managed to take a fall and scrap my knee...lol You have done well writing this poem. The flow and rhyme are done well throughout the entirity of this write. Wonderful Job!
Blessings
celticmoon
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i have not really played this game but you know you wrote a great poem about it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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