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My Affliction

i feel as if...
everyone suffers but me,
everyone struggles but me,
i hear about peoples lives,
so hard and tough,
i look at mine so soft and mellow,
i have everything i ever wanted,
while others have nothing,
whats my affliction?
i must have one,
everyone does,
why must i watch the people suffer and not be able to do anything,
i have the will but not the power...
where theres a will there is a way,
but you need the power to find your way...

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  • Theactoffailing
    June 11, 2007

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    Better than your first. social comparisons are a good theme for your poetry. more organized and flows better than the first. possibly extrapulate on the power comment. but good write.


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    June 11, 2007

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    it sucks you feel like this doll;;
    but your not alone, there are people out there for u to talk to

    ♥
    xox
    -alice


  • Fading Into Black
    June 9, 2007

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    i love this. i am so sorry you feel like this. i hope you learn that you cant do everything urself and that you can help urself too bcuz u r just as important and a great friend.