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Old Flame

Stepping through the obstacles, I see the boundaries fade away.
Knowing and hearing what rises against what I want, I let the voices dissipate.

It's been so long, I thought.
Could I rekindle what was years ago?

I sat in all my confusion and hesitation while he gazed at me with a passion that had never died.

Don't go against the grain, don't try to defy the odds...

My conscience beat my heart with logic so cold,
I analyzed his every word.

Just don't fall too fast, I screamed at the top of my lungs...
Nothing could be heard
And my lips met his for the first time in four years.

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  • Beating gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    oh wow. falling in love with an old love, but still trying to control one self. I love the last line. It's so sweet!