Nights full of sadness
Dreams filled with pain
Misery's curtain,
surrounds me again.
~*~
I'm drowning in tears
My arms getting weak
From treading in rivers of bleak.
~*~
Wallowing alone,
Asleep in my grief
Hoping I wake
Before I reach defeat.
~*~
They swallow me whole
They make me scream
these dreams
that kill me in my sleep.
~*~
There is no sun to wake me here,
just dreams to swallow my fear.
To grab hold,
pull me deep.
Alone I cry,
No words I speak.
Author notes
Option #3
A contest entry
- options, options, options by hungermuncher.
400 points, ended June 22, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i like this poem, its sad but well written, i especially love the last stanza. well done xx
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this is good i liked the flow and the darkness well done and best of luck in my contest j
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