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Breath (Haiku)


Breath upon your neck
Sweet words whispered in your ear
it shows on cold days

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  • Matt Holck
    June 13, 2007
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    what is it?


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 10, 2007

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    I've seen your comments Tang, and now I know why you've said them. Sorry. But this is a beaut of a haiku. Though you always write them so well. (Wish I could!) Still a great job.

    Thanks for entering
    Storm


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    My guess to this puzzle is the wind but that is just a guess. I treally like the poem. It is short but says so many words.

  • mcheadle
    June 9, 2007
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    Threats and promises

    like on a cold day once the words are said the feeling often fade away