Roam softly,
under soft sheets
Its been a rough day.
Passionate comfort,
Is all I seek.
Linger,
while attending plump buds
Massage curves,
Sigh... pure delight
Tenderly,
fill me face to face
Loving orbs engaged
Gentle & Fulfilling
Now please,
hold me until I sleep.
A contest entry
- The Best of the Best of the Best, etc. by Heavenly Angel.
1500 points, ended June 13, 2007, 22 entries
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1300 points, ended August 18, 2007, 49 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this would be nice. good poem, i like it.
jd
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Lovely and sensual, and very tasteful. The words you chose gave this piece an impeccable character; it is full of class. Exquisitely worded and very well done!!
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This is a lovely poem. It is subtle and its eroticism lies in the subtext; a very sophisticated poem. Well done!!! Chris.
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Oh wow, nothing like a rough day and topping it off with the last bit of energy spent in passions throw then drifting to sleep...sheer contentment indeed! You did great with this. Glad to see your poetry still going strong. I missed ya
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Outstanding!!
This is such a familiar scene of contentful love btween the two that have become one. A love that one hopes to sleep unto eternity without change of emotion of the moment. Very touching and romantic!! I felt the feelings of ultimate peacefulness as though it is all that really matters in the eternal existence of the spirit. A touch of that here on earth weaved in your poem perfectly! Very well done! Love it! Sincerely, Don
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excellent~
This is so very soft and sensual....
Makes me want to go lay down with my hubby now...&
Ummmmm look what ya have done to me
Love this sweetie it rocks and best of luck in the contest...
Love ya
Your sis
Susan~~~
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speechless this is very beautiful!!!
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Very softly and sensually written, the imagery is wonderful, keep up the good writing and good luck in the contests...Scott
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It is always nice to feel loved after such a hard day. thanks sis for sharing this sweet beautiful write.
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Nice sensual expression fulfilling the desire.
"Now please hold me until I sleep."
Absolutely wonderful picture that the tenderness of someone's arms can provide comfort.
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Excellent
Very touching and heart probing. Nice sensuous essence.
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Excellent
Just love this poem. It shows all the emotional needs and feelings that one needs to feel inside when they are at the end of a long hard day or feeling low. The need to know that someone is there for them ad can melt all the stress away with loving feelings. Wishing you all the best in this contest Brian.
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Your erotica is so delicately handled and exquisite, and is quite delightful to read. Best of luck in the contest with this wonderful poem.
David Michaels
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Waves to David, hey brother!!
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Love this writing
This so takes me to places I know we all want to be.
Great stuff
Terry
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Very good
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very nice
tasteful and sensual!
simple but very seductive!
It gives me a warm feeling!
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cute little piece here of someone just wanting to be held after a tough day, something I normally long for!! good luck in the contest
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Wonderful
Oh my such a soft and tender write. Very well cone. Good luck in the contest. -
Awww...this is a cute and sweet poem.....now I'm ready to go to sleep
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Awesomely beautiful and wonderfully sensual...
I LOVE this! Sigh....
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this was short and simple but to the point i enjoyed reading it and i hope you liked writing it...good luck and thank you for entering!
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That is exactly what every guy needs to hear. You stated clearly and poetrically exactly what yyou want This is a very seducuing and lovely piece of work.
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really like this one. "pasionate comfort, is all I seek" - I guess we can all relate to that one Very sweet and sensual!
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Another Gem.
"Its been a rough day.
Passionate comfort,
Is all I seek."
A request from the heart and mind...
Beautifully stated ,words used to their best.
Sensuality shown ,tenderness, love...
desire as a subsidiary theme...
Alan
Enjoyed Muchly.
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Beautifully soft... sincerely sensual.
Such a pleasure to read such hrsrtfelt passion. Beautiful!
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Dee, I can't take much more of this heat,
The picture you paint with your words is sheer loving desire.
Pssst, line 8, I would rather massage your curves, yes I would, than message them.
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