I watch your body moving in the dark through the door,
Undressing you with my eyes and still longing for more.
My fingers sliding slowly up the silk of my thighs,
Drawing you closer with soft moans and sweet sighs.
Touching myself deeper and seeing you there
I feel the first of many climax's beginning right here
Standing while watching you offering yourself to me,
Thoughts and desires in my head beginning to flow free.
I remove my cloths and unveil my body to your wondrous glare,
My eyes cut deep into your heart with my icy stare
Looking straight into your soul I want you just like this
Forever in beautiful perfection like morning mist
I see your eyes hungry and full of desire,
Your breath quickens and your veins run full of sweet fire.
Your fingers reach slowly and come to gentle rest
Rest on the soft, pearly curves of my tender white breasts.
You take greedy handfuls of flesh, a change in your eyes,
You pull my tender form close, heat on the rise.
Touching your body feeling the warmth,
The heat of your pleasure drawing my attention to the source.
With my fingers and tongue I begin my decent,
Licking and stroking I work closer to your moistening clit
As you begin to breath heavy I know I'm doing it right,
I gently drag my tongue and taste your glorious delight
Exploring my body I never want this to stop
Aching muscles between my legs getting so hot
Every lick makes me squirm and beg for more
Perfect sensation from your fingers is what I adore
I'm ready to climax, I'm coming so intense
As my juicy slit flows you lick up the mess
Feeling you come and tasting your heat
I know I'm making you come by the curling of your feet
I finger you more because I want you to beg
Tell me to make you come until your swollen and red
I'm throbbing and stressing from the thought of your love
To feel you from the inside while I'm above
Do you want me in now, Gentle or Hard?
Do you want me delicately, or till I see Blood?
I feel you hard against me, throbbing and hot,
Our bodies entwining into a pulsating knot.
You lay me back on your sheets, nibbling my lips,
My thighs wrap tight around your lusty hips.
I feel your aching tip kiss my moist, melting heat
I moan your name softly and arch upward beneath
"Make love to me baby" is all I can say
Slow at first like you love me, then pound away
I arch my back teasing with my still throbbing cock
I reach down, delicately and gently rub it around your spot
Not wanting to go in yet, I slide it up and down the crease
While your going wild, all I want is to hear "please"
I lean down for a taste of your kiss
Soothing flavour from the passion of your lips
I want to feel you deep, every second to last
I want you on top, my dick tight within your clasp
Everything is going blurry, I can't stand this anymore
I'm willing and ready I want you inside me more
I roll you on your back, I'm on top leaning low
Sitting on your legs I start stroking it slow
One hand on myself keeping it wet
While the other rubs your shaft your turn to moan and beg
I want it in me, so smooth and so thick
I close my eyes and imagine the perfection of your dick
I'm so hard and ready for you
I can't handle this much longer I don't know what to do
You hand moving perfectly up and down my skin
My wandering eyes envisioning the perfection of sin
Make me your lover, please no more playing around
Please place me inside you, then slide yourself down
I need it bad right now like nothing else
I'll be a slave to you baby, with everything I've felt
With a Moan and a Smile I prepare to slide down
One hand on your cock the other spreading me apart
Just the thought of what's to happen makes me orgasm again
That’s it, I can't handle this any more, I slide you in
Instant pleasure as I slip all the way down
My fingers in your hair, tangling your soft sweaty crown
I'm in a constant orgasm it just won't stop
This feels so good I can feel my heart starting to drop
From the inside I can't begin to explain
The warmth and wet pleasure just after you came
This feels too good I can't go for much more
Alluring temptation with your body as the door
I feel my head getting light I know what's to come next
Make me come baby, let me unload in your flesh
I look into your eyes, now you’re the one in control
I'll hold it off until you tell me to let it all flow
It's about to happen again, more sensitive then before
I know this will be the last, I can't come anymore
I go as hard as I can, forcing you into making me break
I'm going more furious then ever my hips are about to dislocate
This feels like it, I'm getting ready, can you come with me now?
Baby please finish inside me I don't want you to pull out
I feel the first blast and I begin to come hard
I make you go as deep as I can I want it in far
I squeeze and clench every muscle I got
Vision going blurry I'm red swollen and hot
Hands on your hips and I pull you down
I thrust with all my might as deep as I'm aloud
With every blast my chest begins to thump
Every shot from my cock makes you flinch and jump
I can feel you pulsing and shaking from inside
My stomach clenched tight as we finish our ride
Your juices dripping from my groin shows me I did alright
Even as I'm softening your still so warm, moist, and tight
You collapse beside me unable to move, speak, or see
My juices pouring from your pussy, still hot and creamy
"Did I do okay baby? Are you satisfied with me?"
"I'll tell you in a minute dear, give me some time to breath"
"Alright, I'm tired baby, I'll be here all night"
I cuddle into your massive body, still warm and soothing, feeling just right
I put my left arm around your back to pull you in to me
Using your body as a pillow I listen to your heartbeat descending
I want to stay like this forever, perfection in time
Heartbeat singing me to sleep with it's deep thundering rhyme
"I love you baby, you'll be in my dreams as I sleep"
I whisper in his ear "You’re the best I ever had, I can still barely speak"
The End
Author notes
Written By Full-moon-Fever (women) & DirtyDeerock (Man)
Thanks for your help baby, this turned out beautiful.
First verse is the girl, second is the guy. It goes like that the entire way until the end. The last full verse is the guy (Of course).
The Line after is the guy again, then the girl...Following that Order till the end
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A contest entry
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What did you think? Did the two of us work well together? Did this feel as erotic to the reader as it felt to the writer?
Comments
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Very intensely erotic!
Wow!
Steams up ones' monitor, it does!
Congratulations on all the trophies!
The best to you!
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omg!!! i ummm..wow! as all great sex and writes, i am left speachless!
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This is the longest write in the contest so far and suprisingly I read the whole thing. My eyes were like wide open the whole time. This is an amazing right, very sweet and I wanted to know what was going to happen next. Teasing is the best thing to read..and do lolz =p my favorite liens were,
"It's about to happen again, more sensitive then before
I know this will be the last, I can't come anymore
I go as hard as I can, forcing you into making me break
I'm going more furious then ever my hips are about to dislocate
This feels like it, I'm getting ready, can you come with me now?"
very nice! Thank you for entering and good luck! -
Thank you for your most sensual entry, Josie
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Are you kidding me?! The question above the comment box..."Did this feel as erotic to the reader as it felt to the writer?" I have no idea how the two of you felt writing it but damn! I know how I felt reading it! Going to take a cold shower!
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You missed your rhyming mark, just a bit, but in the end, this is really an excellent verse to the sexy and erotic side of things....thanx for your entry and best of luck, poet...
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This poem still makes me mess my undies, even though I helped you write it.
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That's Awesomely Hot!
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Wow.
Now this is something !!!
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Very inspiring. Seems like both the characters are teases in this yet they achieve their ultimate goals in the end. A nice poem. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Wow!!
What a Journey You take the Mind through with images to leave the jaw agape
Magnificent collaboration-
The fan had to be on HIGH and the squeegee
needed a new blade...
HOT!!
Congratulations on Your Trophies!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Keep that quill dancing~~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice~
Many blessings to You Both in all You do Sweet Souls
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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It still gets me all hot and bothered.
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Very well written. I liked how it switched off from the male to the female's perspective. The flow was great as was the descriptive words that were used to inhance the imagination of the person. However, there was no mention of a particular holiday.
This was a wonderful ero piece.
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Wow!
Hot and intensely erotic
The passion written was just overwhelming!
You write very well together!
Well done! Wish you the best!! -
wow this is great i absolutly loved reading it..made me hot!lol
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This is a good long piece, giving plenty of time to build from start to finish. Very descriptive and works well through a rhyming scheme. Very hot. Very good.
Good write and congrats on bronze.
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That's hot. I don't know what else to say. The intesity, the passion... *deep breath* I think I need a minute to calm down...
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this is great i like how you just cuddle at the end and rest
Riftkin -
Eros will be playing the harp of happiness as soon as he reads this great piece.
Thanks so much for participating in my contest. I wish you all the best. I encourage you to keep on writing my friend.
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Oh ya
Great job No details left out here
Good luck in the contest
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The two of you worked very well together and took the rest of us on a nice ride. My best part was all the cuddling at the end. It's so realistic. I go thru the shh's can't talk now just hold me and OMG, I can't see.....lol Good luck in the contest. Wonderful job, you two. Hugs~ Cuddles
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yep....lol i really enjoyed this and could follow the his and hers all the way... good luck in the contest
cheers
jen
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Well I have read a lot of great poems and I wanted the finalist pick the winners.....now I'm not saying I want you to read every finalist but if you could read some poems and let me know if you think you should win let me know also thansk
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holy shiz! this made me go crazy! omg... I just about had a major orgasm reading it! my god! you did a wonderful job writing this! keep it up! and good luck in the contest(s)
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This is a very good poem well worth the golds
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this is DEFINENTLY not what I asked for
especially considering I am only a kid
But this was a really good poem
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awesome collab. I thin you did wonderful with it.
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Ohh I really like this. Thanks for entering and good luck
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I'll be Right Back....
Ok, now....whew!!!!
Kept going on...and on...and on...and on...
Refreshing and Indeed Freaky...loved it and I wish you Luck in the Contest.
I need this on film
Oops, that was not suppose to come out...but oh well...
Hint...Hint...don't think u need luck though,
Outstanding!
Piff
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Thank you very much...you don't think it was too long do you? I mean should it have been shorter or is it okay?
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yes it did wonders...lol...i thought you guys did a great job on this peice and im pretty sure you guys are gonna win one of these contests you have going here...it was very hott...good luck in the contest and thank you for entering
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So far a gold and a silver...can't compalin with that
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I think I like this poem.You both work splendid together.Yea it felt real erotic.This poem got me well you know lol it was almost to good to be true im liek this cant be a poem lol...so amazing but hey i know that is how the best sex you've had leaves you trust
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Hahaha, and to think that myself and her have never once laid a hand on eachother eh? She did a very good job of setting the bar for me to keep up to
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daaaaaaaaaaaaamn that was loooooooooong lol...yer jus lucky EVERYBODY over exceeded the LINE COUNT lol...was supposed to be 20-30 lines only...im overlooking that tho so your safe...oh n btw that was DAMN GOOD YALL
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Sorry about making it so long, we both were kinda trying to be as descriptive as possible with the entire event.
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WOW!! You two did fucking wonderful!! This is so hot and steamy, I think I almost came myself... wow.. this is great stuff. You two worked very well together!! In the poem and writing the poem, lol. Very descriptive, very passionate, and so erotically sensual and steamy I can hardly breath! Fantastic write! It flowed wonderfully, the rhymes were perfect, the form.. male and female.. the balance of the emotion in this poem.. it all amazes me. Great work you have penned here. I am in awe.. two people wrote this.. its fantastic!
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