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Haiku - Nature's Heart

when nature's heart stops

beating the rhythm of life

all souls will turn grey

 

 

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 10, 2007

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    Too true. Lovely piece and great answer. Different take on it, but I liked it. Keep up the great writing.

    Thanks for entering
    Storm


    • JustADutchie gold member
      June 10, 2007
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      Thanks for your comment. My 'different' view might come from the fact that Haiku's always involve nature and Senryu's people and feelings.