The spell is cast
The dream woven
The darkness only makes their light more real
Unimaginable beauty casts the shadows aside
Knowing nothing but their purity
Their innocence
I am young again
The dark can no longer touch me
They have changed it
Given it back to me in a way never thought possible
Light and love are now mine to share
The night my time to spread this new hope
Author notes
For the picture contest for the greeters team.
A contest entry
- A contest for the Greeters ~ invite only by Little Eagle.
650 points, ended June 18, 2007, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It was very deep I thought it was a masterpiece! You should make a poetry book.
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wow....i like this poem,despite being short is holds alot.I think that alot of people feel the same way on that subject,
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Thank you so much.
Despair
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this was such a great write, and I mean that. It was gosh inspirational in a way, humbling even, this us one I will remember for a very long time. thanks for writing it.
-shiny thoughts and wishes.
D.
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment!!!
Despair
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amazing write.. i can't believe i missed this! you are so brilliant, i am so glad to see you writing again! yay!
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this was beautifully done! bravo!!
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Thanks doll face!!!
Despair
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I am very happy to have read this one. A masterpiece in so many ways. Feel, and purity in each line.
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Hey you!!!! I didnt think you were ever coming back here. I am happy to hear from you as always. Thanks so much for the comment.
Despair
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Thank you for your entry
Yes their light in the darkness, I can see how you have taken this from the picture. I does seem like they are the glowing light of good in a world of darkness and evil. Good expression, flow and structure. Thanks and good luck.
God Bless
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I love this piece
this is my favoirte part,
"Unimaginable beauty casts the shadows aside
Knowing nothing but their purity
Their innocence
I am young again
The dark can no longer touch me"
It paints a vivid picture of darkness trying to consume, but not being able to. For some reason this poem puts me somewhere between the movie "legend" and "the last unicorn" I don't know why, maybe the atmospheric feel. I'm glad to see someone thinking outside the box, do you mainly freewrite your poetry? Or by slow, methodical planning?
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Those were the movies envisioned when I wrote this piece. Thanks much and I appreciate the comment.
Despair
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Awesome my fav part wasmakes their light more real
Unimaginable beauty casts the shadows aside
Knowing nothing but their purity
Their innocence
I am young again
The dark can no longer touch me
They have changed it
Given it back to me in a way never thought possible
Light and love are now mine to share
The night my time to spread this new hope. -
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Thanks. I am glad you liked it!!!
Despair
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Excellent
This is really a great write. Short to the point. And most of all very well written.My favorite lines are Light and Love are now mine to share The night my time to spread this new hope. Thank you for shring your gift with the rest of us. Hope all is well with you. Talk to soon. Blut Rot
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! I always appreciate your comments!!
Despair
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It was in my view a very cool and calm poem.
I totally loved how u didn't ryme. And u rock at at writing this kind of poetry. And I thank u for my rating at my site.
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Thanks alot. I am not great at writing light or calm pieces so I am glad you liked it.
Despair
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very uplifting and pretty peaceful. the opposite of my feelings now. a brilliant write.
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Love ya sis!!!
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