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Fool For You

I'm such a fool for you
I'm hopeless without you
You get me through
When I am blue

And when I cry
My tears you wipe
I smile with pride
You are my light

When your around
I hit the ground
Dont make a sound
To you I'm bound

Laughter I hear
Behind the tears
Through our years
We'll fight off our fears

I'm such a fool for you
I know what to do
Say I do
To marry you

Author notes

I will see the movie 'In Bruges' in 2008 when it's released

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Think about a tune similar to the song Linger, cranberries.

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  • Morgaine
    June 18, 2007
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    Nice poem, thank you so much for entering and good luck!