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Trapped inside myself

Come here, please,
Come help me out of here.
Listen to that music
Playing in the background there.
Hear it?
Yes?
Well that's my only friend.

No, no, don't leave me.
It's not really that bad
It's just the only hope
That keeps this corpse alive.
For nights are spent
Alone with nothing
Except those notes
That never leave.

Help me, please?
Be different than the rest
Those that pretend to love
And in the end betray
Like the entire,
pointless,
Human race.

No i'm not crazy.
Just trying to stay alive.
Although it seems to be
That everyone I speak to
Wants it the other way round.

Do you, dear?
You want me dead too?
Then just leave this poor girl
To suffer in this prision.
I thought for once you were...
Different.
Not like the rest.

Please try to understand
I'm not everything I seem.
Its just this overpowering lonliness
Is tearing at my seams.

alone again
As it always ends.
Won't you be the one
To rescue me?



Author notes

I chose option eight =]

Some parts were in italics, but they didn't let me use them apparently...

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  • Crazy-Baby
    June 9, 2007

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    wow this is quite deep, i love the lines "No i'm not crazy.
    Just trying to stay alive." how true, the erst of it is gr8 too, well done thnx for entering xxx