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Temple exhales Soul
Masterpiece unveiled for show
Life-Death-Rebirth Art








 

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 10, 2007

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    This was n excellent haiku Desire. Very powerful and, well, elegant if you will. Love the lines.

    Thank you for entering.
    Storm


    • Desire gold member
      June 10, 2007
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      Thanks bunches Storm
      I at first had the Heart of Spirit..in my Head
      and *gently slaps head*..
      but noooooooooooooooooo did I word it that way

      Thanks for the visit
      and much love~ Desire~*~


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    Wow what a clever write indeed!
    Wonderful repesentation!
    All the very best in this contest
    Gaylene


  • StarEyes
    June 8, 2007

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    And again, this is fantastic! I never did get the hang of haikus. I have tried, just never can do it!! Best of luck in the contest!!!

    and much love

    Nettie


  • Amera gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    Bravo!

    What a beautiful representation of life.
    A piece of art for exhibit; wonderful!

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • Ethereal One gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    lovely haiku

    Your words express so much emotion. I like the way you have used the word exhale, and this haiku creates many spiritual feelings for me.

    Best wishes in the contest!

    Aurora 2012


  • soulfultia gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    A wonderful thought provoking haiku! Very well engineered my friend! Never a dissapointing read with you and always my pleasure ~Tia


  • penman gold member
    June 8, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. A great use of Haiku. Good luck in the contest.


  • Bedroom Eyes
    June 8, 2007

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    Wow...this is very deep. Ya HAD to go and make me think didn't you? Ah well...I suppose a stray thought every once in a while isn't so bad LOL.

    Well done with this Haiku. As I said...it makes you think

    Good Job! Good luck in the contest!

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