Temple exhales Soul
Masterpiece unveiled for show
Life-Death-Rebirth Art
Masterpiece unveiled for show
Life-Death-Rebirth Art
Author notes
Haiku
5-7-5
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A contest entry
- Riddle Me An Entry by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended June 10, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was n excellent haiku Desire. Very powerful and, well, elegant if you will. Love the lines.
Thank you for entering.
Storm -
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Thanks bunches Storm
I at first had the Heart of Spirit..in my Head
and *gently slaps head*..
but noooooooooooooooooo did I word it that way
Thanks for the visit
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wow what a clever write indeed!
Wonderful repesentation!
All the very best in this contest
Gaylene
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And again, this is fantastic! I never did get the hang of haikus. I have tried, just never can do it!! Best of luck in the contest!!!
and much love
Nettie
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Bravo!
What a beautiful representation of life.
A piece of art for exhibit; wonderful!
Love,
Amera ♥
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lovely haiku
Your words express so much emotion. I like the way you have used the word exhale, and this haiku creates many spiritual feelings for me.
Best wishes in the contest!
Aurora 2012
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A wonderful thought provoking haiku! Very well engineered my friend! Never a dissapointing read with you
and always my pleasure ~Tia
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Excellent
Very well done. A great use of Haiku. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow...this is very deep. Ya HAD to go and make me think didn't you? Ah well...I suppose a stray thought every once in a while isn't so bad LOL.
Well done with this Haiku. As I said...it makes you think
Good Job! Good luck in the contest!
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