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The heart of the matter.

Pumping your spirit
the ebb and flow, your being,
Never miss a beat.

A contest entry

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 12, 2007
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    nice

    can you possibly tell me in your own words what makes up a haiku good write thank you for shaing


  • Beating gold member
    June 10, 2007
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    wow. so much said, with so little words. Never miss a beat - love it!


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 10, 2007

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    Excellent choice, great writing. All very truthful to the correct answer. Nice work.

    Thank you for entering
    Storm


  • individuality gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    well we try not to miss a beat though sometimes we do skip one or two when love bats her eyelashes at us a good piece.


  • PinkChef
    June 8, 2007
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    Very concise, I enjoy your write! Congrats on such a good one!

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