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(...trading in dreams for explanations...)



    UNFINISHED

[My life has runaway from me]

Drowning my self in sorrow,

for something I don't know if it is real,

for something I don't know if it is true,

and yet it is all becuase of you.



I hate this.

Wanting....

(so deeply) to know an answer,

knowing that one will never come.



Wanting it all to be over,

Wanting it all to be done.



I don't know what to say,

and I don't even know exactly what or how I feel.

My head and my heart,

are telling me two very different things,

and any more I can not deal.



Emotions built up

as years passed by,

wanting forever to cry,

yet my eyes are empty and dry.



My heart is broken and torn,

wanting it to be over,

I cry a tear,

and from the ashes

I wish for a new life,

a new begining to be born....

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  • Junkyard
    July 13

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    great poem....I cry a tear, and from the ashes I wish for a new life, a new begining to be born...brillint...


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    June 19, 2007

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    It has strong feeling in this and though you say it is unfinished it still gives the sense of your longing for that new beginning. I liked it. Love, C


  • Nicolette Everett
    June 18, 2007

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    I like your poem is has this aspect to it that is beautiful and very lovely. Even though this is a sad poem. It still has this beauty to it. Very good!