holding emotions
burning flame or frosty ice
a red, heart shaped box
Author notes
Heart shaped box = heart
A contest entry
- Riddle Me An Entry by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended June 10, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2 or 3 lines ONLY ANYTHING GOES! by Florida Sunshine.
450 points, ended June 24, 2007, 113 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice, very nice. very sweet. and true as well.. a heart of passion or an ice cold heart - very nice. waht about one half defrosted?
Good Luck in Malicai's contest.
Claire-Anne -
This is a terrific write! Thanks for entering my contest!
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A fine haiku with the correct answer. Nicely done. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for entering
Storm -
Wow
very nice it has such emotions even though its such a short poem!i could never do that all my poems have to be long to get to my point!
great job,good luck with this contest i hope you win you realy diserve it!Keep up all your good work!
-maddie
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I think yours is better than mine! The background gives the poem strength!
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Thanks! ^_^
I really like haiku, I speeding through the classes pretty fast. Yours was very good as well. You can add the background too if you want.
Sorry I stole your answer, but that's what I thought too.
*embarrassed*
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