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fool for you

you know I'm such a fool for you
and so I wait...
an armor plated smile concealing my feelings
I know what my friends would say
and I don't care about what's right anyway
my love for you gives my life meaning

I wrapped my heart around a song
and so I drift..
carried away by destiny's seas of blue
I know what my friends would say
and I don't care about what's right anyway
you know I'm such a fool for you

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"I will see the movie 'In Bruges' in 2008 when it's released"

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  • Morgaine
    July 4, 2007

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    Great poem, very good interpretation and expression of the emotion in the quote - thank you so much for entering and good luck! Love, Morgaine