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the mill

The creaking and the clanking of the giant water wheel,
clickity clack, tipity tap, says the spinning Jenny,
cotton fibers swirling in the humid air,
perspiration lingering on our furrowed brows,
we're losing our hearing and our eyesight,
at least the noise drowns the screams
of those who lose fingers.

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