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Deafening Silence

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Deafening Silence
the rain drops sounding loudly
on tin garage roof.

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  • Upkeep
    June 11, 2007

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    How is there silence if the rain is dropping loudly? Why is the haiku accompanied by a picture of a rainbow if rainbows come after rain and in the haiku it is raining?


  • Hetha gold member
    June 9, 2007
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    Great pic, depictive words, and awesome imagery! Great job! Good luck in the contest.