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nature

the birds sing in thier birdnest
the animals play and run wild
the deer likes the forest
they cant ever try to smile

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  • Celticmoon
    June 12, 2007

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    This is a short but lovely piece you have written here. You have created a wonderful picture of the forest too. Great job!


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    celticmoon


  • azure85 gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    This is so nice, nelly. It is a lovely forest scene, and one which reminds me of the coming summer..........