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Not over till I say its over

How long have we been together,
what, like two years?
Now you're telling me its all over.
I'll have to disagree.
I'll never stop believeing,
that we were meant to be.
And I'll see that we remain that way.
We'll be together still.
I'll hold you and never let you go away.
Even if its against your will.
You wonder how i'm capable of such?
I laugh, i must say..
After two years you don't know me very much.

But darling, i don't blame you,
I keep my dark side hidden.
Until times like this,
When it needs revealing.
You see I'm a woman ,
who knows what she wants,
and baby your as* is mine.
Don't mean to be blunt.
Baby don't run, 
please don't you bother,
you don't want to know,
what became of my ex-lovers
I really don't want to hurt you.
My heart isn't so hardened.
so lets put this behind us
And pretend it never happened

Author notes

actually this poem describes how i really am. all my ex boy- friends are dead. don't ask me how

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  • Beating gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    that's... disturbing. but yeah, I'll applause the honesty, though if it were me, I wouldn't want to be with someone who doesn't want me. Oh well...

    • Taboo Pixie
      June 9, 2007
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      OMG...its just a poem..its not that serious..the note at the bottom ..was just to tease the reader..but thanks for the comment anyway...i'm not really like that

  • Aurora Ceres
    June 8, 2007

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    I forgot to mention that if nothing else, I at least admire your honesty as this is certainly one of the most unpretentious poems I've read of late.

  • Aurora Ceres
    June 8, 2007
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    Well, this is certainly interesting. A little spooky. I've always been of the mind to let someone go that doesn't want to be with me. It's their loss really and I am sure they will come to realize it later on down the road. It takes two to make a relationship and I am certainly not going to waste my precious time struggling to hold on to someone that wants to be cut loose. Anyway, a very thought provoking write to say the very least. Thanks for sharing.