Yellow jaded marbles
LIned up on a string
Clouded irises, mystery
Always watching me
Golden as the sun
Cold touch as the moon
Lined up on a string
Stars twinkle through the noon
Falling from my fingers
Catch them if you think
Its power can be handled
Lined up on a string
Author notes
I tried my own new structure, but it sounds stupid and rather repetitious. Let's see though-
its a-b-c-b rhyme, then the 2nd line of the 1st stanza is repeated throughout the piece, falling down teh stanzas to 3rd line and then 4th. O.O Tell me what you think.
pegleg
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