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A Fool For You

You know I'm such

a fool for you.

After all these years

you know its true.

We've climbed those hills

and stood in awe.

We held on tight,

our deep devotion we saw.

 

You know I'm such 

a fool for you.

I look into your eyes,

and fall into your azure blue.

Your arms around me

holding me tight.

My soul rejoices and

beleives we are right.

 

You know I'm such

a fool for you.

After all these years

you know its true.

Our marriage is forever,

a blessing from above.

It's filled with

a neverending love.

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"I will see the movie 'In Bruge's in 2008 when it's released"

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  • Morgaine
    July 4, 2007

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    Written beautifully - I love your style. Also the message is incredibly sweet. You definately gave it a twist that I hadn't seen in this contest before - awesome! Thank you for entering and good luck! Love, Morgaine.


  • BeautifulFlame
    June 10, 2007

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    Awww!

    This was very touching!
    You are one of the lucky ones to find someone so special !
    I love the way its written very playfull!
    hugs
    ~Lisa~


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    SO SWEET AND LOVELY!!

    If only everyone could feel this way, way to many couples break up after a short time together, no one wants to love truly anymore.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    very sweet

    u r quite the romantic miss lady! good job!
    P.S.I'm always impressed by your-"visual accompaninments!"