Simple little movements of my soul
Will take you on a trip of hope
And peace will fill that gaping hole
And release you from that burning rope
No more will you feel pain
No more will you be sad
For you will simply rise again
Feel the pleasures that you had
Hand in hand we will step above
The sorrow that you bare
Discover then my eternal love
As you realise we are there
Our journey will end in the doorway to your heart
And on the steps there will be some grooves
I’ll remain a vision in your dreams you know I won’t depart
Because you'll remember me when the west wind moves
Author notes
"I will see the movie 'In Bruges' in 2008 when it's released"
In a list
A contest entry
- Work my favourite lyrics - not that hard! by Morgaine.
400 points, ended July 4, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a touching poem - I can totally relate to it. Such deep love is hard to capture in words and you've done it absolutely wonderfully. Thank you so much for entering and good luck! Love, Morgaine
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wow this is great poetry my dear friend very thought provoking indeed xxxx
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definitely a keeper as the song will move through my mind today....excellent...
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You have made this piece very lyrical with a strong message, now if I could hear it again with that accent
Love, C
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