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I'm [his[ t.h.e.i.r plaything;; At Least Then They c|a|r|e.

Can't you feel me [hear] crying hard

It's all because of you baby and I'm broken

because you are just one of the rest

a man that just wants s|e|x;;

I tried to believe nothing more or less

but I know that's the truth, you know it

why not admit it - I'm your plaything

didn't you ever know it hurts so bad to breathe.

Sometimes I w*i*s*h I was never born;;

I just think of my eyesight problems and all

then growing up with a schizophrenic sister

it's all pretty f|u/c\k|e_d up isn't it?

Don't you see me [[look deeper inside]]

I may smile on the outside and wink at you

but all I'm really trying to say is *loveme*

please I am begging you that's what goes on



I look strong on the outside I must confess

but on the inside I bleed from all the rejects;;

It's painful to be wanted to be fucked

but when you want a relationship or love

then you have no hope [[piss.off.you.slut.]

|you|are|only|good|for|one|thing|sexy|bitch

What have I done now, what have I said?

Why am I bleeding and wishing I was dead?

Why do I have to care about [him] so much

It's not as if when we don't talk he breaks

so why should I break when I hear his voice

knowing that nothing [except.a.quick.fuck]

will make him really want me;; make him care

oh what do I have to do to be the one?

Can't you see what's going on in my heart

I'm just a girl wanting [s.o.m.e.o.n.e.] to love me

I don't care w*h*o just as long as they want me

not just to sail their fingers down to my thighs

not to push me into a corner where I do not fight

but you can guarantee that I cry.

                                                                          

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♥Option 1♥

This is how I feel. I can only get effection from men by being sexual, otherwise I'm nothing. Even then I'm just a slut, but at least I'm a slut that everyone wants. Ah, it's sad and pathetic . Thanks for reading. I feel like crying now.


maybe if my hearts stops beating it won't hurt this much

x Empathic Rose x

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    A emotionally powerful poem
    With honesty and raw feelings throughout it

    Excellent piece


  • MikeLondon gold member
    February 22, 2008
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    I like all the stuff you did wit c|a|r|e etc, made it a more intriguing read.


  • MelissahhMidnite
    September 23, 2007

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    Wow. It seems that the only thing guys want us for is dirty rendaevous. I feel you pain dllfayse. Well written.


  • over the rainbow--x
    August 21, 2007

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    Wow, sweetie, you don't deserve to be treated like this, this was amzingly written sweetie.


  • Simple-Fairytale
    August 12, 2007

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    Sweetheart. I have the same exact thing when it comes to guys...except, I don't want them to love me, I don't want them to touch me either...and for a long time, I let them. And it shames me sooo much to admit that. Especially when people thought I was a slut, just because I wouldn't stand up for myself...but. enough about me. You don't deserve this kind of treatment, so don't accept it. Beautiful write doll. Good luck in the contest : ]


  • whiterabbit.
    August 3, 2007
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    Wow there is so much emotion here. grrr I hate when guys act like that. No one deserves that. This is a terrible feeling to have. You did a wonderful job writing this. I really like it a lot. Thanks for entering sweetie.


  • littlegirlapril
    July 29, 2007

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    I could not stop reading
    This is one amazing write darling
    I loved the emotions and intensity.
    Great job kiddo. :]


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 28, 2007

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    Damn. That was intense. You stunningly used words to your advantage. I know a lot of women like this. I used to be one. It was like that scene in Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind when Jim Carrie's character told Kate Winslet's character that the only way should get people to like her was to sleep with them.
    This was a great poem. Good luck in the contest.
    Write on!
    ~*~SP~*~

  • XweXareXbrokenX
    July 18, 2007

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    this is so sad...so emotional...so powerful...and simply wonderful...it really makes you want to just cry when you read it because theres so much put into it...

    Don't you see me [[look deeper inside]]
    I may smile on the outside and wink at you
    but all I'm really trying to say is *loveme*
    please I am begging you that's what goes on

    those lines really stuck out to me and gave me shivers...

    ...just remember darling...you ARE worth it so never let yourself be ashamed of who or what you are because you decide who you are...not labels...

    ....great piece...thanks for entering

    XchaoticXdisasterX


  • thelovesongwriter
    July 13, 2007

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    very heartbreaking....i hope you can get through these problems..great write & best of luck .

    -lovesong


  • rawrbby
    June 9, 2007

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    I agree with Disturbed..they only have control over you because you let them..you'll find someone someday who will treat you right, and don't settle for less than you want..you CAN find it. if the guys in the poem 'like' you, you must be a pretty girl..just be strong and try to find hope somewhere..and never give up. you aren't a slut and you shouldn't be treated like one.

    thanks for entering


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 9, 2007

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    you are not a slut and if those are the kind of men you hang out with it is better to be alone then like that, you are a woman, a blessing upon this earth, don't let them treat you like that, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • whiterabbit.
    June 8, 2007

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    aww, this is sad. I know how this feels. You deserve better and so do I. This is really emotional, sad, and full of pain. It's beautifully written. Thanks for entering.


  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    June 8, 2007
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    this was an interesting write, keep up the great work.

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