chase, catch, and pounce
kittens will be kittens
as they simply play.
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For the Denver Post summer week by week poetry contest.
Please tell me what you think
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Good
I love to watch little kittens play
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This is so sweet cute poem. I love kittens. I have 2 kitties named Maggie and Smokey. I love them so dearly. I give them lots of hugs and kisses to show my love that I love and care them so much. They are like kids.
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is that a set normal guide for haiku 5-7-5?
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Yes all haiku's are 5-7-5. Mines off but oh well.
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Your syllable counts are off for a haiku. It should be 5-7-5, you have 4-6-5. Just thought I'd point it out for you. Otherwise it's a cute little write.
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are all haikus with a 575 syllable count?
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I'm awear I was off but it seemed odd with anything else in line one so I streched Pounce into to
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I really, really don't mean to be rude, so I do hope you don't take this comment that way, but you can't really call it a haiku if it doesn't follow the syllable count.
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I know but I don't really plan on using this anywhere.
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