Breathe
Again
Miss angel
Don't die for him
Don't conceal yourself
In your world of water
And purple, sparkling skies
Don't stay there forever, weeping
He cared for you, so he died for you
It's not your fault, he chose the path he took
Spread your white wings, and fly among the clouds
You can't lose all happiness for him
He wouldn't want you to do that
Have faith, you'll see him again
When you return from earth
Return to heaven
Fallen angel
You'll find love
Again
Soon
Author notes
Image one...
Only my second Rictameter...
Do you like it?
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ Pick an Image and write what comes to mind by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended June 26, 2007, 14 entries
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This is just excellent! Bravo!
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Ooh, a rictameter
that's something I don't come across with often 
you have done a remarkable job here, thank you for entering
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acrostics?
i really like this.
and though i'm not really familiar with poetry forms..i couldn't find the word that it spelled out... probably my problem.
i hope she'll find love
soon...
awesome write.
good luck
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Oh hahahahahahahahahahahaha
This is not an Acrostic, sorry to confuse you!
This style of poetry is called a Rictameter, you start out with a one syllable line then a two syllable line then three,four, etc.
I typoed the authors notes, sorry again, I hope that you still like the poem.
BTW: An Acrostic is a type of poem that spells out a word or words with the first letter of each line. Like this.
S--imply write
E--very line
E--xactly like this
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hahaha
~you said acrostics!~
ok that's cool
Rictameter goes until 9 syllables and then starts counting down right? that's what i heard
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