The hollow of essence, the air of life that pulls on the strings
From the hollow creatures appear. Things not of this world swirling around through the magic and chaos, swords and fight battles and wars things
Unimaginable to the earth noble way’s the earth may shift and
Realms will for the swerving petals through the air. Tornados
That speaks and tree spirits that walk among the living days and where they should rest somewhere else today. Fairies and pixies all alike gather on the magical night.
The night where they gather at the hollow of essence today...
Author notes
Age 13
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ Pick a Title and Roll With it 2 by Amunet Wolfbane.
450 points, ended June 14, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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If you were to shorten your lines and transform them into separate stanzas I think the flow of this piece not to mention the presentation of it would really help it much. Nonethless you have done a splendid job penning this piece. Nicely Done!
Blessings
celticmoon
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