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[ Never tell me I dint try ]

Never tell me I dint try
I gave up my soul
I wish it all die
again
again...

I stayed up late
for your call
yet still you tell me
I dont care at all
again
again...

(chorus)
Is there nothing
I can do?
Is there nothing
I can say?
to take it away
please take it away

I listened for your touch
I watched for your sound
But everything you gave
I never found

(chorus)

I gave you everything
I sacrificed it all
but only to fall down
but only to fall

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yeah.
im sad

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  • hopelessly-broken
    January 4, 2008

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    oh wow this is sooo sad, so fun of emotion!! I LOVED IT


    keep it up, and i hope your alright now!!

    peace out
    HB
    xoxoxo


  • NyteShade
    December 19, 2007
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    great write here MetalHouse. I like the chorus, nicely done.
    It flows very nicely.


  • Thayla
    August 28, 2007

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    Love it!!!

    I love your writing and miss you stacks. Hope you have been good and been taking care of yourself. You are truly talented, never forget that and don't let anyone tell you other wise


  • nobodys-girl
    July 18, 2007
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    been there...i know how much it can hurt. i hope your ok mike and i love you. never forget it.


  • XfaceXdownX
    June 11, 2007

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    this is really good. i like it. i can really relate to it. especially this part:
    I stayed up late
    for your call
    yet still you tell me
    I dont care at all
    again
    again...
    i like this a lot.

    i love you more than anything.

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