My cat
Charoltte is a beautiful cat
She's at
My dad's house so i don't get to see her alot
She's black,brown, and white
And she just had four kittens
She does bite
Sometimes she does
She's got amber colored
Eyes and she's very fluffy
I guess you could call her multicolored
And she's very nice
When she's mad she'll scratch
But when she's happy she'll purr loudly
And she'll attach
Her claws to the sheets on the bed
Once she got scared and
Ran under the couch
And glared
At me
She's really nice most of the time
But that's not the reason I chose her.
I chose her because she's my favorite
Of all my nine pets,So that's the reason I
Chose her!!!!
A contest entry
- Calling ALL Kids 14 and under!! Introduce me to your Favorite Pet by Breelynn.
500 points, ended July 7, 2007, 15 entries
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M.H. beauitful writeing love it
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^.^
so cute!
wow-you have lots of pets!
She's really nice most of the time
But that's not the reason I chose her.
I chose her because she's my favorite
Of all my nine pets,So that's the reason I
Chose her!!!!
Keep it up!!!
pegleg
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Wow NINE pets? Your house sounds like mine. We have 5 dogs, a few turtles, a snake, and a couple of cats (but they don't come home very often)
I love your cats name...my mom's name is Charlotte. What made you choose Charoltte as her name? Have you named the kittens yet?
This poem is a very nice introduction to your cat and her moodiness. lol
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Great job!
This is a good poem. I really like your choice of words, they are very descriptive. You are a good speller for an 8 year old
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very good
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Go!
go sakura!good one i realy like it, your cat sounds very nice. to bad i never got to meet her sence she is at your dads house i wish i could.i hope you win this contest you diserve it sence your only eight this is a wonderful poem!!!goo sakura you go!
-maddie
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