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What Can A Girl Do?

When you kiss me like that
I tend to forget
All the pain you've put me through
So that's how I know it' true.
For Once you said you loved me
Was that a lie or was it just you
Trying to keep me around again
You know I'm such a fool for you.
When you talk to her you say
She loves you just as I do,
But she can't love you like I can
I've proven this one time and again
But you know me so well and you
Know where my heart is at
So lie to me
I promise
I'll believe
This time.
But maybe this is all
Just my way of letting you know
That it's in my arms that
You still call home
That girl of yours can wait not more
Just love her dearly
But love me more.
I can't help but feel this way
I hardly know her
Just her name
And baby she's not even in the same state
What can a girl do
But want to be your fav?

Author notes

"Lie to me- I promise I'll believe" is from the song "Strong Enough" by Cheryl Crow.
"Once you said you loved me- was that a lie" from the song "Once you said you loved me" by Frances Black
"She can't love you like I can" from the song "She can't love you like I can" from Destiny's Child
and
"You know I'm such a fool for you" from the song "Linger" by The Cranberries.

and yes I WILL SEE THE MOVIE "IN BRUGES" IN 2008 WHEN IT IS RELEASED!

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  • Morgaine
    July 4, 2007

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    I love it that you used several quote and kept the poem strong and clear - strong emotion and well written. Thank you for entering and good luck! Love, Morgaine


  • RedHotPianoGirl
    June 8, 2007
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    I will see the movie 'In Bruges' in 2008 when it is released