staring into nothingness
reading only anguish
in the lines that are aimless
in the dark I languish
here I sit in desolation
feeling all the pain you’ve given
written fully with frustration
gentle essence unforgiven
can you read the lines you wrote
upon this life of mine
how can you seem so remote
you have caused this decline
walk away before you see
me vanish into time
from you I will ever flee
lost here in my prime
innocence lost
in an ever rising wave
never counting the cost
nevermore your slave
Author notes
c-Trapped into my words
In a list
A contest entry
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425 points, ended June 8, 2007, 18 entries
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WOW!!
Very Strongly said!! & an Excellent write!!
Pen On
Thanks for entering my contest & Best of luck
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GloriousGift -
good!
I love this...its heartfelt, and beautiful. Its strong and angry but also very sad. At least thats how I see it! =)
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