im not just the pretty girl
look, come watch me make it
I need to hear you tell me
Because I feel that I can’t take it
I will grow to be successful
Doing all I’m meant to do
Can you see it here inside me?
That I’m worth it all to you
Will you stay right here beside me?
Feeding me the knowledge that you know
Will you feed the light inside me?
Then step back and let it grow
Are all the bets, bet on me?
Do you believe ill take it all
I am destined for the right life
As long as I’m standing here tall
I will grab hold of all the power
I am as great as any man
Come with me
Come take me higher
I am here because I can
A contest entry
- Much To Offer by Hello Love Goodbye.
697 points, ended June 14, 2007, 24 entries
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I liked your poem! You did a great job. My favorite part is:
I am destined for the right life
As long as I’m standing here tall
I will grab hold of all the power
I think everyone should feel this... Good luck in the contest! -
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thank you. yea it does take alot to get yourself to feel like this, but sometimes when your pushed around and douted enough you some back stronger then ever. thank you for your comment and wish of luck. : )
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"Will you feed the light inside me?
Then step back and let it grow"
I love those lines.
This is really a great write, and you really established and independence with the last lines. Very good! -
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yea, i think those were my facorite lines too. thank you for your comment, im very glad you liked it. : )
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Very nice. It was a lovely poem. I loved all of it.
Great job and good luck!
Kirsten
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thank you sooo much, im REALLY glad you liked it. im never sure about them, but your comment really makes me feel good about it. thank you: )
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