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Save Me If You Can

I'm trapped inside I can't get out
I'm begging for release
I try to crawl but cannot move
Waiting for these screams to cease
These walls are now my prison cell
They are pressing in on me
If I don't escape the madness here
This hell will swallow me

[CHORUS]
So take my hand and lead me out
And show me what to do
If you can't save me from this pain
I'll never make it through
I'll beg and plead on bended knees
I'll agree to any plan
Just make this hell now disappear
And save me if you can...

I've prayed and prayed to be let out
But god just doesn't hear
He's left me in this living hell
As all my options disappear
A city can be a prison cell
It can trap you within it's walls
And make the streets a hollow hell
Where the darkness always falls.

[CHORUS]

Don't hesitate reach out for me
Before I jump and fall too far
I'm too afraid to just let go
If I don't know where you are.

Just say the word and I'll be strong
With you by my side
But if I falter hold me tight
Before I run and hide.

So say the word don't let me fall
I'll take it step by step
And wake up from this hell I'm in
Maybe then I will forget

I'll beg and plead on bended knees
I'll agree to any plan
Please make this hell just disappear
And save me if you can...










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option# 5 g-Savin' me by Nickelback

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  • Transcend All
    June 8, 2007

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    Transcend all

    What you've got is a dark gift to tap your imagination, the words flow on paper with light so not to be misunderstood! Groovy!

    Namaste


  • Hebz
    June 8, 2007

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    WOW!!

    "Just make this hell now disappear
    And save me if you can..."

    Brilliant!! My favorite song in a very lovely poetic song...Excellent write..

    Thanks for entering my contest & Best of Luck
    GloriousGift


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    June 8, 2007

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    I absoluely love Nickleback. I guess hanging out with younger people helped me learn of them and learn to enjoy their lyrics and pulsing music. Well done!