You are my rock,
My confidant, my hero.
Beyond an angel,
You are beautiful.
Listen to my heart beating,
It says more than words need to.
For, you alone make it beat;
With the intensity of our love.
My beautiful princess,
You are beyond perfection.
Eyes like crystal diamonds,
Shining light upon me.
Kiss my lips;
And my all.
Taste my soul,
~ Ours as one.
If I could I'd paint a world without darkness.
Just take my hand and hold onto me always.
Even if our road becomes torn and broken,
I will fix every single shattered piece.
I will stand by your side as the world burns out,
As long as I have you, I shall have a world.
I'll never let anything hurt you;
Without thinking, I'd die for you.
Til the end of days,
Our rings will shine.
Bonded in love and unity,
Forever, you are my wife.
Author notes
I Love You Baby. ♥
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A contest entry
- The Love For A Girl by Ignis Corpus.
385 points, ended June 10, 2007, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww that was very beautiful. I love the lines:
If I could I'd paint a world without darkness.
Just take my hand and hold onto me always.
Even if our road becomes torn and broken,
I will fix every single shattered piece.
Those words just me so much. Thanks so much for entering and good luck. -
Great job dear. At first I was gonna point out how the flow of this poem is continually changing, but then I realized that's exactly why it's beautiful. You have your own, unique talent and you should treasure that. Keep it up!
Luvs,
Cj
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So romantic, love filled beautiful. To find a love so deep and special is hard to find. Your very blessed to have this relationship in your life. Your words flow like music, the meaning deep and strong, a wonderful pen! Hugs, Kelly
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Wonderful
Poem u have written with full of emotions love heart and soul all through out this poem. U did an alsome job and written straighten from the heart way to go keep up the gorgeous work that you do cause its beautiful i mean beautiful.
I will stand by your side as the world burns out,
As long as I have you, I shall have a world.
I'll never let anything hurt you;
Without thinking, I'd die for you.
Til the end of days,
Our rings will shine.
Bonded in love and unity,
Forever, you are my wife.
Bravo amazin words this whole poem is gorgeous congratulations on the trophy. way to go ttyl
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sweet..
You make me believe love
when its really the last thing I would think of
Congrats on your gold, babes
keep it all up
love ya ♥
NeveR
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wow thats good, i think you got talent im glad you entered this i enjoyed reading it, but this contest it is gonna be harder than i though i will get you in there though i loved the piece
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awwwww how cute lol. Me likes this mucho. True love is hard to come by and it seems that you are one of the lucky ones.
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My beautiful wife, this brought me to tears, the words you've written are so full of strength, and emotions, you have no idea how deeply you touch me, you complete me so much. *bawls* Baby these tears that fall are of the purest of joy, I can never be thankful enough for you, you're beyond perfection my beautiful goddess. Sweetheart, our love and bond is rare to find. Beyond death my angel our love is immortal. I'll always be there for you, to comfort you, and guide you, baby you're my all, my very best friend and I truly adore you more than words can say my beloved angel of light and love. No matter what obstacles, come forth my mommy your baby will remain at your side holding your hand tightly, as long as I live my life shall be yours I will be devoted and faithful to you my goddess, the queen of my heart, the beholder of my heart and soul. I love you soooooo very much*cries* Thank you so very much for this beautiful piece. I love you my angel Forever and Always, just us♥
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