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Cant fucking wait till you turn blue.

Spit with distain
At your war torn collection
Frozen faces in the emptiness
Of your hoard
White crystals form
dripping from each overhanging
unnatural limb
crystalline white
Sulphur bringing life to them
in such a wasted way
Festering in ideas of a worlds assimilation
From all your victims/friends
Each and

Every

One

everyones every inch

Day is absent in your ever spreading night
You need no eyes in this place
take others as your own
Feel you feeling me
Not out of longing
but to process.

Represent everything you’ve ever read
No individual slant
others are good so you can be too
Fucking leeching cunt
Pick you off like a bitter festered scab
But you’ve got what you need
Taken specimens of my seed
Add them to your set
Bitter fetish fuelled collector
Get your fingers in feel around
not through sick passion
Just to rip out my heart and dissect
What makes me tick

You fucking prick
yeah you sucked my dick
licked every drip
Felt my seems split

Just

To

Take

What, pours, through

All victims of circumstance but
Some take their own stance
You fucking leeching cunt
Something’s better than nothing?
im not so sure
Something’s better than nothing?
Something’s certain
Cant fucking wait till you turn blue.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    June 12, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is excellent. Violent and straight forward. However, I just want to double check that this is categorised as adult, because kids shouldn't be reading it. It's well written and very powerful, and effective

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  • BareBeast
    June 8, 2007

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    wow... A hell of a lot of anger is obvious in the poem. I can feel the strongest of emotion through every line. You detailed it well and described what I would never wish upon an enemy. Just Clever. well done