You値l remember me as the west wind moves
the corn heads on the summer plains,
I値l thread through shoots of ripened corn
to clear your mind of winter rains.
You will sense my heart in a sylvan glade
hear its beat in the rustling trees,
feel its warmth in the sunlight strobes
touch its love on an evening breeze.
You値l remember me as the ocean roars
in the yawping cries of windblown gulls,
in the spuming waves of troubled seas
in the heaving bows of creaking hulls.
When stirred by shadows that catch your eye
perchance 奏is I am standing there
for I am borne on nature痴 breath
to be beside you everywhere.
Author notes
I will see the movie in Bruge in 2008, when it's released.
Inspired by Fields of Gold by Sting
A contest entry
- Work my favourite lyrics - not that hard! by Morgaine.
400 points, ended July 4, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love how you made this such a 'natural' poem in every sense of the word. It's very touching and very well written - thank you for entering and good luck! Love, Morgaine
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i liked this poem i mean you did a great job on this, i have not hear of the song but i think i will look it up, the images were something i loved, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Light and Airy.
Beautiful in it's presentation and as light as the subject. A fantasy mood the develops is a pleasant aftermath of this wonderful poem
Bazza
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Very nice, I loved it. It remind me of a poem I wrote long ago about the spirit of the earth. Good luck in the contest.
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wonderful peice i love it great work and good luck in the contest1
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Wonderful! I love the flow. Beautiful.
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Excellent
It is a pleasure to read well crafted and meaningful poetry. So much of what passes as poetry these days is mindless drivel. Such is not the case with this beautiful work. Well done.
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Lovely!
This is truly beautiful! You have such a soft pen. I really enjoy reading this. The flow is so liquid and adds to the image. Very well done!
Love,
Amera ♥
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Awesome!
Yes, I do feel God's presence soo much in nature! This is a beautiful poem, which conveys that thought well!
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SO GENTLE AND PEACEFUL!
As I read your soft, beautiful words I had a gentle sense of calm and beauty. Thanks for the relaxing read.
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