Your glance enthralls me
You capture me with just a look
Your acceptance is your decree
My heart you read like a book
You see right through my flesh
You caress my soul with your touch
My spirits you do refresh
As my mind in your eyes you clutch
Words are not uttered by your lips
Your gaze penetrates me - hypnotic
You strip me to the very tips
My thoughts are mindless and chaotic
You penetrate me with a stare
You captured my mind behind closed doors
You undress me - I stand here bare
My soul and body will be forever yours
Author notes
"c-Trapped into my words" - I altered your heading a bit - hope you don't mind *smile*
A contest entry
- ◄Show Me What You Got!!► by Hebz.
425 points, ended June 8, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"You penetrate me with a stare
You captured my mind behind closed doors"
Wonderful!
YLM
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WOW!!
Excellent write, I enjoyed reading every line, even every word....
Thanks for entering my contest & best of luck
<3
GloriousGift -
a loving tribute to your Master... well done in yet another amazing piece that you have penned... from your heart and soul your words run deep... well done
cheers
Jen
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SEX RAY VISION
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